Monday, June 11, 2007

IN-CLASS GUITAR POEM

A guitar
Alone, without words
your curve fits perfectly
in my arms
Where you give song
to the words
My heart cannot find.
Ms. Cheby

Guitar is like a woman with beautiful curves
you can play it real loud till it gets on your nerves
Christopher M.

Wooden smell with a hole in the middle
strokes, strokes, is what i aim for
in the middle of the black hole.
Carlos M.

The music that plays in our ear
is for our satisfaction.
Evelyn T.

The felling of the vibration
sending tones with sensation
Guillermo H.

A guitar a musicians lover
the humming with each packato
the keep curves to hold it firm
and the satisfaction to satisfy others.
Jose R.

Hold it gently
glid its strings
and play beautiful music with it
Karla C.

Oh guitar how i like to
pull your six strings,
so everyone can hear me.
Robert C.

The feeling of the vibration rhythms
against your body
sends sensation down your back
deed the structure formed of a woman body

Looking at the curves from the guitar
is like looking at my own.

typed by Robert C.

8 Comments:

At 11:58 AM, Blogger CaRoLiNa said...

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At 1:40 PM, Blogger themedina23 said...

amazing how we can all achieve to make a poem by fitting our toughts together and we all come up with metephors.

 
At 9:46 PM, Blogger CaRoLiNa said...

Hey i wasn't there that day so i could add my peaces of the poem. That not cool. I still like it though

 
At 11:34 PM, Blogger lichee said...

Yes, you may add your piece to the poem. Since it is under you log-in you should be able to edit the poem, so just add yours wherever you like.

I am glad all of you are enjoying this one as much as I am.

 
At 2:47 PM, Blogger AWESOME MiSTY said...

the poem turned out really good.
everyone differnt view of a guitar really makes this poem unique because you wont find another one like it.

 
At 10:01 PM, Blogger VanessaLZ said...

This is an awesome poem i really like it because its a combination of a bunch of peoples view of a guitar. Its really original.

 
At 8:07 PM, Blogger Yalitzat said...

i really like this poem especially because at some point i try to learn but never got the hand of it and as now i like it because now i play the bass but good why on discribing the guitar...

 
At 11:56 PM, Blogger Carlos Z. said...

I forgot to add my piece. It said something about a G string. Well its still a good poem. Good job everyone.

 

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