How it feels to be colored me.Christopher melendez
I grew in the united states of america and was raiced in east la.being known as mexican has bother me but i live with it cause mexicans and salvadoreans are kind of the same. everytime i get made fun of i know their just playing around so i dont take it serious. but im proud of being salvadorean i feel unique knowing that theres not so many salvadoreans in east la.the people in east la look at me good so i dont have nothing to argue about. but i am glad to be salvadorean and it feels good to be salvadorean. define me however you want but im better than you if you judge me.
posted by themedina23 @ 1:50 PM
5 comments
5 Comments:
I liked how you feel very strong about your heritance and i liked what you said at the end you left me with taught in my mind.
I love your last line. In the beginning it is unclear to me why you single out Mexicans and Salvadoreans. Also, you need to edit for spelling, punctuation, and capitalization.
Nice one Chris.I like it.
it is true, you cant tell mexicans from salvadoreans and its cool that your very proud of being salvadorean.
Christopher WELL EVEN THOUGH YOU SIT RIGHT NEXT TO ME IN CLASS AND AS FOR KNOW WE HAVE BEEN DOING SOME POEMS AND SO ON I FOUND I THINK THAT YOU HAVE THAT SOMETHING SPECIAL IN YOU AND KNOWING WERE YOU COME FROM MAKES YOU A BETTER PERSON. JUST KEEP THIS IN MIND GO FOR IT OR JUST DO IT HAVE A LITTLE MORE CONFERENCE ON YOURSELF
Post a Comment
<< Home