Five ways of "A Perfect Evening"
My perfect evening has
The golden glow of the
Sunset, in the distance.
As the quiet calm of the evening ,and
The gentle waves
Of the sea washes to
It's sandy shore.
As the night draws near
And the sound of the tiny
Creatures great and small
comes out to play.
With you and me
In each others arms.
Watching the sunset
go down.
This simple pleasure
In all it's measure, Refreshes and
And unites two hearts
Full of hopes and
Dreams.
4 Comments:
this is romantic and mysterise
i think thats how you spell but i don't think it is
any ways
i like it
I like your poem a lot..
now I want to spend a eving
with you...
It's really touching and
emotional...
HEY YALITZA AWESOME POEM DIDNT KNOW YOU HAD IT IN YOU. ITS CUTE, SERENITY, LOVE, COMFORT, COME TO MIND WHEN I READ THIS.
REALLY NICE. LOOKS LIKE YOU WERE REALLY INTO IT WHEN YOU WROTE THIS. I LIKE IT.NICE JOB
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