10 ways of looking at EMO'S
10 way's of looking at emo's
My trend is emo,
i wake up put my hair to the side,
covering my eyes,
putting eye shadow above and around my eye,
acting very shy
cause my trend is EMO.
I looked to my side when i was playing football in the dirt,
I see freaking emo kids, wanting the attention with tight shirt,
and tight pants, and the girls with tight skirts.
Being with heroine makes me bliss, or happy.
I pick up a rose, take it to my heroine,
and express myself, and suddenly shes
in the trend as EMO
Stupid is what they aim for,
cutting themselves, swallowing the pain
and releiving the tension, for
their EMO feelings
Expressing what we feel, crying, cutting
sad, angry, happy, bliss, and any emotion
is I and we
Hard or soft whatever this music is,
you cant understand the metaphors and screaming
lyrics they sing. What kind of music is this?
and what does this have to do with EMO?
everybody is watching me why?
is it my different color hair,
or the way i just look?.Am I different
than them? do they hate the EMO's? why me?
Im not liking this feeling i just want to
fit in but i cant.
We need to give those EMO"S a reason,
a reason to cry and bleed.
lets make them feel the way they want to feel,
but worse. Scared as they are lets make them more
scare.
Hiding from the crowed i just want to be alone
with my taughts. woder i wonder why is this world harsh,
i just want to listen to my loud music feeling like a
black crow
Seeingsters, seeing kids whatever they are no good use.
black why do they use black?.
there hearts are half red half black, for the
reason that their happy or sad.
drop drop the blood is dripping
from the hiden places ive cut myself.
AIM FOR BLOOD, PAIN IS WHAT WE FEEL SOMETIMES,
BUT SOMETIMES IT CHANGES TO HAAPINESS.
HEROINE IS THE ONLY THING TO MAKE ME FEEL HAPPY.
5 Comments:
i helped with this poem.
i think with at least one stanza.I like the way it cam out.Good Job Carlos!
I like it
its harsh and right to the point
This is a really good poem. Its really original. Good job Carlos.
DUDE THIS POEM IS THE SH#T. I LOVE THE FEELING IT GIVES OFF. CONTAINS SOME MUCH EMOTION, HATERED, WOW WHAT I RUSH! and if misty did help REALLY WOW. KUDOS YOU GUYS KUDOS!
I SAY YOU READ THIS IN FRONT OF THE CLASS!
I like your poem because its like your telling a story of two opposite people. One side you have an emo kid, and the other side you have someone who is really against emo kids.
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Good job Carlos.
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